Friday, January 24, 2020
Write on Topics You are Passionate About :: Teaching Writing Education Essays
Write on Topics You are Passionate About How do I become a better writer? Is it by proofreading and listening to my teachers? Does it come in time? Or should the question be what do I write better about? Do I write better about scientific garbage or idea and topics I can actually relate to. I will go with the latter. I write better about topics I am passionate about. For example, I can write more vividly about cheerleading and soccer than I ever could about evolution. Let us focus on becoming a better writer again. I watch television and go to movies frequently. I occasionally read books. Reasonably, engaging in visual entertainment and reading other authorsââ¬â¢ work aid in my writing style. The shows I watch and the books I read are usually about topics I am interested in or passionate about. Specifically, the movie Pleasanteville, the television show Felicity, and two books A Perfect Storm by Sebastian Junger and A River Runs Through It by Norman Maclean help me to become a better writer. To begin with, Pleasanteville is an interesting movie that can easily be paralleled to the first book of the Bible, Genesis and to the civil rights movement of the 1960ââ¬â¢s in the United States. The movie depicts two people bringing "color" to the lives of many. The "color", however, must come from sin. Therefore, the new "coloreds" are banned from the Garden of Eden so to speak. This is also very similar to the colored people being banned from public buildings and events for being different. These two topics, the Bible and civil rights of humans in general are of great interest to me. Hence, I paid attention to detail on how the director presented his ideas to the audience. By learning his techniques and agreeing or disagreeing with them can help me write better by simply applying his work to mine. Additionally, the television show Felicity is a show about college freshman students straight out of high school. The show focuses on relationships and hardships that a college freshman will encounter. Considering the fact that I am technically a college freshman myself, it is only natural that I allow this show to intrigue me. In particular, one episode caught my attention. This episode dealt with the issues of boundaries in a friendship and lightly touched on the issue of date rape.
Thursday, January 16, 2020
Methods Armitage and Duffy Use to Convey Their Ideas About Essay
Both Carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage use a range of methods in their exploration of the theme of change. Duffyââ¬â¢s poems tend to be more personal although in her poems about change, such as ââ¬ËPlutoââ¬â¢ and ââ¬ËThe Captain of the 1964 Top of the Form Teamââ¬â¢ she writes in a male voice which then distances her from the speaker. Armitage writes more universal poems, few of which are written of personal experiences in the first person. Both write about change in a mostly negative manner, particularly seen in ââ¬ËPlutoââ¬â¢, ââ¬ËThe Captain of the 1964 Top of the Form Teamââ¬â¢ and ââ¬ËAfterword. The use of form and structure contributes considerably to the exploration of the theme of change. It is used variably through their poetry. In ââ¬ËMan with a Golf Ball Heartââ¬â¢ by Armitage, he uses what could be a sonnet to express change. The poem has fourteen lines and at the sixth line begins with ââ¬Ëbutââ¬â¢ which signals change. It could therefore be a modernised petrarchan sonnet. This would be appropriate as one of the poemââ¬â¢s themes is change and would be an original way to explore that theme. The poem is written in prose-like free verse as Armitage is telling a story of what happened when he opened up a golf ball and is then likening it the manââ¬â¢s heart. By doing so he uses more description and creates clear visual images. The graphic description of the golf ball uses words such as ââ¬Ëbitterââ¬â¢, ââ¬Ëbadââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Ëweepââ¬â¢ which have negative connotations. The view of change in this poem is negative and tells of how the man became. The prose technique is again used by Armitage in ââ¬ËGoalkeeper with a Cigaretteââ¬â¢ in which the poem is written entirely in that style. This poem is a detailed description of an old-fashioned goalkeeper and therefore is helped by this writing style. By using an effective description technique Armitage is able to explore the theme of change in a different way in that this poem looks upon change in a nostalgic way that is not negative. However, in the poem ââ¬ËAfterwordââ¬â¢ Armitage uses a very different structural technique. It is written in three quatrains and a couplet which is organised in a style preferred by Duffy. This is used as the poem is quiteà straightforward in its description of when two twins become distanced. It does not look at how, merely focuses on an instance when they are reunited. The structure then enhances the simplicity of the poem. The tone of the poem is less romantic than that of Duffyââ¬â¢s work. Its tone is cold. Alliteration accentuates the ââ¬Ëfââ¬â¢ sound in the first stanza which sounds harsh. This highlights change as it is not a tone that one would associate with twins who grew up together so therefore a change must have occurred. It also uses lots of rhyme where the words are matched up, in a way that twins are. In the second stanza all the rhymed words rhyme with twin. The rhyme also creates a steady internal rhythm. Carol Ann Duffy also uses form and structure to accentuate meaning. It is used in a very particular way in ââ¬ËPlutoââ¬â¢. In this poem the layout is different to others. Rather than the normal organised stanzas they are uneven and the second and third stanzas are indented. Duffy does this to represent a change in tense. This is done quite dramatically, as the style is very different to her preferred method, and so emphasises the change in tense and the emotions the speaker is feeling in being different to how he once was. His thoughts are written in italics which further adds to the uneven form of the poem. The form and structural techniques used in ââ¬ËThe Captain of the 1964 Top of the Form Teamââ¬â¢ more like Duffyââ¬â¢s style. The stanzas are organised and all are end stopped. It looks organised on the page and is preferred by Duffy. The first three stanzas are spoken as if from the past and the final stanza jumps to the present, therefore highlighting a change in the speakerââ¬â¢s life. Duffy uses italics again here to highlight quiz questions, answers and sounds. This breaks up the rhythm of the poem which could be a reflection of the speakerââ¬â¢s dissatisfied attitude to his current state and how his mind is still in the past before the change to his life occurred. Duffy again uses organised stanzas in ââ¬ËBefore You Were Mineââ¬â¢ which are five lines long and each is end stopped. The way the poem is told is unusual as it is talking about the future from the perspective of a child before that child was born. The change in the poem is therefore told from a differentà and unusual angle. This method compares how the speakerââ¬â¢s mother was to how she is now. Both Armitage and Duffy use register and lexis to give their poems a certain feel. In ââ¬ËThe Captain of the 1964 Top of the Form Teamââ¬â¢ Duffy uses words with connotations such as ââ¬Ësatchelââ¬â¢ and mentions icons such as the ââ¬ËSupremesââ¬â¢ in order to give the poem a 1960s feel. This highlights the change from ââ¬Ëthenââ¬â¢ to ââ¬Ënowââ¬â¢. The poem has a negative view towards change shown in its negative tone and register. The speaker is bitter about how his life has turned out. This is revealed in Duffyââ¬â¢s lexical choice such as referring to his children as ââ¬Ëthickââ¬â¢ only because they do not know what their father does. Duffy distances this poem from herself by using a man as the speaker and therefore making the poem more universal. They also both use an informal register and colloquial expressions. These can be seen in ââ¬ËGoalkeeper with a Cigaretteââ¬â¢ by Armitage and ââ¬ËBefore You Were Mineââ¬â¢ by Duffy. In ââ¬ËGoalkeeper with a Cigaretteââ¬â¢ the poem has a nostalgic, ââ¬Ëgood old daysââ¬â¢ theme and so in keeping with that theme the lexis used is old fashioned. Duffy chooses colloquial expressions such as ââ¬Ëjerseyââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Ëcadgingââ¬â¢. The register is informal in ââ¬ËBefore You Were Mineââ¬â¢ as Duffy is talking directly to her mother. She also uses colloquial language such as ââ¬Ëeh?ââ¬â¢ By using this register both Armitage and Duffy suggest times gone by and therefore change to what exists now. Such as, people do not particularly wear jerseys anymore. A technique also used by both is that of metaphorical language and, more specifically, imagery and symbolism. Armitage uses symbolism and metaphors in ââ¬ËMan with a Golf Ball Heartââ¬â¢ as he uses the metaphor of the golf ball to symbolise the manââ¬â¢s heart and the change it went through; how it was an apple once. This particular poem is all a metaphor for the manââ¬â¢s heart, however, in other poems by both Armitage and Duffy symbolism and metaphors are used more to create certain images. In ââ¬ËGoalkeeper with a Cigaretteââ¬â¢ it is used to create a certain image. By using phrases such as ââ¬Ëpouch of tobacco and skinsââ¬â¢ and ââ¬Ësausage-man glovesââ¬â¢ a clear picture of the keeper is formed in the readerââ¬â¢s mind. Further imagery is used in ââ¬ËAfterwordââ¬â¢ when Armitage describes how the brotherââ¬â¢s relationship has become. He writes: ââ¬Ëeach eyeing the other through a telescope which had once been a mirror.ââ¬â¢ Armitage uses the metaphors of mirror and telescope to highlight the distance that has grown between them. Duffy uses imagery in a similar way. In ââ¬ËBefore You Were Mineââ¬â¢ she likens her mother to Marilyn Monroe. This creates an instant image of what her mother may have been like, or how the speaker saw her. In ââ¬ËPlutoââ¬â¢ Duffy uses imagery in a way more similar to that of ââ¬ËMan with a Golf Ball Heartââ¬â¢. The way the speaker is feeling is compared to the existence of Pluto. Pluto is imagined to be a very lonely, dark place. This is likened to the existence of the old man, alone in a Home. He refers to ââ¬Ëanother world out thereââ¬â¢ which can be taken as a double meaning for both Pluto and his previous life which now feels like another world away. By creating this metaphor Duffy is able to illustrate the emotions of the speaker. She also creates images for physical descriptions such as ââ¬Ëbrown coins on my face the size of haââ¬â¢penniesââ¬â¢. Using metaphorical language in these poems contributes to the exploration of change. By creating images it forms comparisons of what was and what is and shows the difference between them. It highlights the changes that have taken places and the speakerââ¬â¢s view of them. Duffy and Armitage have different general styles in their writing techniques. Both use different themes, tones and forms. However in their poems which portray their ideas of change they often both use similar techniques to each other, although each maintains their own style and noneà of the poems could be confused for one of the othersââ¬â¢.
Wednesday, January 8, 2020
Can You Fool a Breathalyzer Test by Sucking on a Penny
Have you heard that sucking on a copper penny will cause a chemical reaction that will fool the breathalyzerà causing it to register negative blood alcohol? If youve had too much to drink and are pulled over by police, dont try it--this claim is false! Variants on the Myth Some say the trick will cause the breathalyzer to show an absurdly high level of blood alcohol, allowing a defendant to make a case for test malfunction. Others report the because this trick has been successful.à The U.S. Mint changed the composition of pennies from pure copper to mostly zinc. Variations on the Copper Penny Gambit Sucking on a nickelSucking on mints or cough drops: Breath fresheners such as mints, gum or sprays can cover the odor of your breath, but they cannot change the amount of alcohol present that will register on a breathalyzer. In fact, mouthwash can contain alcohol and thus can elevate blood alcohol content readings.)Eating garlic or onionEating peanuts: This is the closest option that could work...if you could wash your lungs with peanut butter! The high levels of sodium inà peanut butter will neutralize ethanol in alcohol by creating two byproducts - sodium ethoxide and hydrogen gas. But, the problem is that ingested peanut butter goes to your stomach and not the lungs, which is where the air thats full of alcohol is going to be expelled.Eating curry powder.à Taking a very deep breath, hyperventilating or holding your breath before you blow: An old study from decades ago found that hyperventilation and vigorous exercise did lower participants BAC readings by as much as 10 percent . On the flip side, holding their breath actually increased BAC readings by up to 20 percent. Keep in mind that these methods can also make you lightheaded and gasping for air ââ¬â odd behavior that will likely call the attention of a police officer who already thinks youre under the influence. Also, note that only blowing lightlyà into a breathalyzer doesnt work either as it gives an accurate reading with small breath samples.)Chewing vitamin C tablets Analysis of the Copper Penny Myth Even if the slight amount of copperà in a U.S. penny caused a chemical reaction with the alcohol in a drunk persons saliva (a claim with no scientific basis), it wouldnt likely fool a breathalyzer which measures blood alcohol content by sampling air blown from deep within your lungs. Besides that fact, standard procedure for the test includes a 15- to 20-minute delay before taking a sample so the subject can be observed, and to ensure that any recently imbibed substance has been fully absorbed into the bloodstream. The Discovery Channels Mythbusters Adam Savage and Jamie Hyneman tested various methods alleged to beat standard breathalyzer analysis in an episode originally aired in November 2003. None of the methods worked. Interestingly, this claim never reports personal experience, but rather is stated as a rumor: I heard that if you do this, you can beat the breathalyzer test. Resources: How a Breathalyzer WorksCraig C. Freudenrich, Ph.D., HowStuffWorks.com Is It Possible to Beat a Breathalyzer by Sucking on a Penny?Seattle 911 - A Police Blog (Seattle Post-Intelligencer, Februaryà 16, 2009
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